100 Word Stories: Relativity Detour

Publisher: 100 Word Stories
Weekly Challenge: 1033
Topic: Vanishing Point
Submitted: December 30, 2025
Published: February 8, 2026
Participants: 8 total
Recommended Topic: Yo Momma

Relativity Detour
About the 100 Word Stories Weekly Challenge

About the 100 Word Stories Weekly Challenge

Behind the Story

This story was written for the Vanishing Point weekly challenge and immediately pulled me back to high school art class at Frankfort High School. I remember drawing a sprawling maze of staircases inspired by the ending of Labyrinth, where Jared the Goblin King (David Bowie) wanders through a surreal, impossible castle, singing “Within You”. At the same time, Sarah (Jennifer Connelly) looks for her toddler brother, Toby (Toby Froud). At the time, I didn’t even know who M.C. Escher was—I was just having fun exploring perspective and experimenting with three vanishing points. My art teacher handed me a book of Escher’s work, showed me the famous relativity drawing, and suddenly everything clicked. That moment stuck with me.

There was also a part of me thinking about A-Ha’s “Take On Me,” with its sketch-world reality and the thrilling idea of being pulled into the drawing itself. That blend of wonder, unease, and childlike imagination shaped this piece. I also loved the Family Guy episode where Chris Griffin falls into the same world when fetching a milk carton from the back of the grocery store shelf.

For the audio, I created thematic background music using producer.ai, timing the shifts to match the narrative’s emotional beats. I recorded and edited the narration in Audacity, tightening timing, cleaning up the vocals, and producing a final 44-second listen.

Impossible spaces, childhood creativity, and that thin line between the page and the real world—that’s where this story lives.

Blue pair of headphones with a waveform shape inside, representing the open-source audio editing software Audacity.
Audacity
Producer.ai
Stylized logo representing the LAME MP3 encoder project, associated with digital audio conversion and MP3 exporting.
LAME
Labyrinth Movie
M.C. Escher Scene
M.C. Escher
Collection of 222 Works
Three-Point Perspective
A-HA: Take On Me
Family Guy
Take On Me with Chris Griffin

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