100 Word Stories: Where the Mountain Speaks

Publisher: 100 Word Stories
Weekly Challenge: 168
Topic: Shrouded in Mist
Submitted: July 4, 2009
Published: July 11, 2009
Participants: 11 total
Recommended Topic: Skipping Stones

Where the Mountain Speaks
About the 100 Word Stories Weekly Challenge

About the 100 Word Stories Weekly Challenge

Reflection

December 28, 2025

This story was written for Weekly Challenge #168: “Shrouded in Mist,” published July 11, 2009, as part of the 100 Word Stories Weekly Challenge. The prompt leaned toward mystery, atmosphere, and the sense that something important waits beyond sight… so I leaned into that idea literally.

Rather than writing about a monster in the fog or some fantasy creature in the mountains, I wanted to explore the idea that people often look outward for wisdom, authority, and answers—only to eventually be confronted with themselves. The “journey” becomes the metaphor that reveals the truth: the guru, the sage, the mystic on the mountaintop… was always a mirror.

Like many of the pieces I submitted, this one reminded me that good microfiction doesn’t need shock or comedy (though I wrote a lot of those too). Sometimes 100 words can simply pause, breathe, and offer someone a quiet thought to sit with.

For this challenge, I also recorded the story myself rather than letting Laurence read it. I used Audacity to capture the narration and LAME to encode it as an MP3, resulting in a 41-second audio version of the piece. Like many of my submissions from this era, sharing the spoken performance felt just as important as the written words—the timing, breathing, and tone helped shape the story’s quiet introspection.

Blue pair of headphones with a waveform shape inside, representing the open-source audio editing software Audacity.
Audacity
Stylized logo representing the LAME MP3 encoder project, associated with digital audio conversion and MP3 exporting.
LAME

Discover more from Lewis Moten

Subscribe now to keep reading and get access to the full archive.

Continue reading